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I would count an infinity of silky sand
And catch and tame some air,
For the honour of holding your glorious hand,
And to touch your perfect hair.

I would walk to the end of a lifetime
With the ghosts of my empty past,
Just so the love that you will promise,
By the morning, still will last.

Maybe I would even die for you,
I can't know, I have never lived,
For all of this time I have been breathing
Without you, I fail to exist.

And I'd kiss your soft hand in the morning,
As I serenely slip from your grace.
Counting my blessings is too hard
And I'm slowly fading away...
©2005-2009 ~ExeuntChasedByBear
:iconexeuntchasedbybear:

Author's Comments

This is a nice little poem I made in about 10 mins. Its rather short, but I love the first stanza, I hope you like it. The poem is about someone I have feelings about (obviously =P) and is rather sentimental. It is a copy of one of m 'scrap' pieces, I hadn't realised how to submit actual Deviations =P.

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:iconbeyondweird:
:O I love it!

Jenni xxx

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:iconvickieash:
Adam you charasmatic piece of dust, it's ace. Omgosh i heart it so much!
Vic xxx

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They're shooting stars, a spectacular moment of light in the heavens, fleeting glimpse of eternity, and in a flash they're gone....

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:iconlaulella:
Aww pretty <3 I likeys
:iconmuki-chan:
I liked the overall flow of it, but the last two paragraphs, lacking a rhyme scheme, kind of threw it off. But I loved the emotion that was portrayed in it, and the imagery used was fantastic.
:iconexeuntchasedbybear:
I agree, I've realised that about it, and I'll probs amend it sooner or later. Thanks for the feedback, 'tis appreciated.

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This is all pretentious drivel.
:iconkami-kara:
yah, you were right, i love it! i read it an i turned mushy, lol, it's soooo sweet, really well done
:iconexeuntchasedbybear:
Lol, thanks. I love this one :D . Tis about someone very special *nods*

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This is all pretentious drivel.
:iconirishhippiepoet:
Hi, your friend beyondwierd recommended me to you, and I have to say, this is about the sweetest and sincerest poems I've read in a long time. Keep it up!

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